Buat Essey Tentang YANG YO SEOB - B2ST
Friday, March 30, 2012
Anyeung Haseyo ...
ak nak post sesuatu kat peminat B2ST semua .. bru2 ni ckgu bi ak ade suruh buat essey tentang orang yang popular dan yang kamu minati .. so masa tu dalam fikiran aku ni B2ST la .. tpi ckgu nak SEORANG sahaj so terpaksa lah ak letak nama YOSEOB ... kalau x ak nak letak satu B2ST trus ...
satu lagi sebelum koang nak baca essey yang ak wat tu kan .. ak nak bagitau ENGLISH ak memang betul2 teruk dalam exam pun ashik dpat C .. so jika ade kesalah pada ayat2 termasuklah TANDA BACAAN tersebut tolonglah ye bagi komen boleh la aku perbetulkannya sekali lagi .. harap kerja sama korang ...
soalan die yg ni :
WRITE AN ESSAY OF NOT LESS THAN 350 WORDS :
a) A FAMOUS PERSON
The Person That i admire most of all is Yang Yo Seob from B2ST group , who was a group of Korean Male Singer . His age was 23 years old , he is quite tall and cute , he have short brown hair and his favourite colour is white . He was also kind , polite , hardworking , helpful , playful and others . His bobbies is singging , compose a new song and read a book . Besides , In the group he was the main character because his voice was so fluty and melodious . He also was a great dancer in the group .
Yo Seob became famous when he joined the B2ST group , who was sponsored by a big and popular entertainment company the name is CUBE Entertainment , Their debute in Music Bank stage in 2009 with the song's 'Beast Is The B2ST' and 'Bad Girl' . By the way the B2ST name actually mean 'Boy's To Search for Top' in other name their are called BEAST with the mean is 'Boy's of EAst Standing Tall'.Continue , although it is only their first single but Bad Girl Music Video song in YouTube has received totally more than 6 million viewer .
Since, Yo Seob increasingly popular in whole Asia . Recently they has held many concert in European Countries . Therefore, it making he more popular .
Finally, I hope so that one day i can meet , get autograph , and take a picture with them including Yoseob esspecially .
Soo .. itu sahaja essey ak ... minggu depn nak kna hntar dah .. so koang semua .. ak tau memang banyak keslahan tanda bacaan dan pengunaan ayat .. harap koang tolong betulkan dgan komen dibawah .. supaya ak dpat betulkan essey ini seblum ak hntar kat cikgu tu nanti .. sekian ....
1 fan
Jhae hyung...hehe...nk ckp sikit je...den pong bukan pndai sgt BI nihh...cume nk tlg hyung je...bley kan...hehe
ReplyDeleteyang prenggan bwh sekali tu,
"Finally I hope" je...perkataan 'so' tu tak payah...
Yang perenggan 2 tuh pulak,sepatutnya camni kot
"Yoseob become famous when he joined B2ST,one of the popular group in Korea under a big and famous company,Cube Entertainment"
Ok...hyung....thanks sebab bagi komen...hehe
Hope hyung dpt good marks esok....
Fighting!!
JOM KOMEN ! JANGAN KEDEKUT SANGAT !